Dream As If You'Ll Live Forever.. Live As If You'Ll Die Today Poem by Abdallah Gamal

Dream As If You'Ll Live Forever.. Live As If You'Ll Die Today

Rating: 4.9


</>Once in a glowing night I was lying beneath the stars,
The moon was illuminating in the sky
I found my self in a world where there are no any liars,
in a world where there is no how or why
Then I found my self flying away leaving my fears,
the clouds were glowing like a beautiful butterfly
the sky rained in a scene as if it rains Dollars,
I scared of that strange world, , how and why?

The rain stopped to show an amazing scene,
the shining sun embraces the beautiful rainbow
It was the best scene I have ever seen,
it was like a huge rain casted in a calm river then flow.

suddenly in the middle of noway I heared a horrible voice,
it was my little brother crying
like if u were in a wonderful place then u found a mice,
thats really makes u feel dying

These are the dreams, , hard to understand it, , impossible to believe it
but when u see it, , when u feel it, , u feel that u've the ability to fly
For u, U see things that are impossible to happen; and u say, 'Why? '
But for me, , I dream things that never were, , , and I say, 'Why not?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Evans 31 July 2011

Incredible, , a poem like that is very beautiful and outstanding, , i love every line in it, , with every line you are showing an imaginary beautiful pic. nice poem son :)

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Poet Of The River 31 July 2011

i enjoy reading your poem. a world without lairs... if only their was such a place. I really enjoyed your poem. keep up the good work.

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Monina Furigay 01 August 2011

I loved your poem-never stop writing

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Geet Asher 01 August 2011

ur really an imaginative person good luck for ur future n keep up the good work

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Shamin Shah 04 August 2011

An incredible poem with an incredible lesson! you will always keep the reader spellbound...with your spanking, new, and zealous prose... 100/10... loved the title and everything about this poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Nalaysia Vizcarrondo =) 24 November 2011

I can relate to it, I enjoyed reading it thanks for inviting me to read it

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Bella Hernandez 18 November 2011

AMAZING! cant personally relate to it but still completely amazing and breath taking poem ~Bella

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Cole Heideman 14 November 2011

comprehensible* my bad

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Cole Heideman 14 November 2011

not bad, as someone below me said there are some issues with your use of the language, but it was overall comprehendible, and pretty good.

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Lenore Lee 10 November 2011

'I dream things that never were and say why not? ' Cute, but you stole that quote. I quite enjoyed this poem on a whole though.

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