Yannis Voultos

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Dream


I am sleeping
With the door open
In the sea
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  • Rookie - 369 Points Stephen W (12/28/2014 4:19:00 PM)

    Odd, but I kind of like it, and I don't usually like odd poems.
    Perhaps it's just your English. Of course, you may be long gone from this site, or even this world.
    It's pathetic they don't bother to choose new poems of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,017 Points Kim Barney (12/28/2014 11:46:00 AM)

    Congrats on your poem being selected three years in a row as poem of the day for December 28! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,718 Points Babatunde Aremu (12/28/2014 10:32:00 AM)

    Nice write! Kudos! ! I like the powerful of imagery. Keep on writing (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,261 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (12/28/2014 12:53:00 AM)

    Imagery implanted well to realise reader the death as a part of material life one spend. The expansion of abstract world resides within beauty, man yet not achieved its ultimate expression to expose its essence of eternity. Suicidal note most relevant utterance where personality feels undone to expose. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,222 Points Lyn Paul (12/28/2013 6:44:00 PM)

    Hello Yannis congrats for making Poem of The Day, I enjoyed this and whilst reading it could see a painted picture of this dream, thought provoking words. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Alistair Graham (12/28/2013 8:01:00 AM)

    Shall I Continue


    To continue as I am will surely add
    to the column inches in the Belfast Telegraph

    To change what I am would perhaps finish me
    I cannot go back and there is nothing ahead of me

    limbo has been removed

    I can destroy what I am on my own terms
    or be destroyed a little at a time

    I can rage in the hope that the dog below
    will be the last echo in the streets

    I think I should take myself for a walk (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 764 Points Leslie Philibert (12/28/2013 6:33:00 AM)

    Like the last line, the half personification of suicide with the use of the article the... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 526 Points Dimitri Jagodinski (12/28/2013 6:12:00 AM)

    I say this poem is deceptive to the mind when read. It is very good yet very bad. Illusive. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,411 Points * Sunprincess * (12/28/2013 4:32:00 AM)

    , , , , , , , , , interesting.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 672 Points Giorgio Veneto (12/28/2013 2:15:00 AM)

    Life is beautiful! Keep on writing Yannis... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,059 Points Tony Karas (12/28/2012 7:41:00 AM)

    Wow! I'm left speechless! An excellent write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Goodness Tchibueze (12/28/2012 3:11:00 AM)

    Good write...I love it.Kudos to you.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Gillian Commerford (12/28/2012 2:45:00 AM)

    Quite haunting, sad and touching.I will read more of your poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (5/23/2009 3:55:00 AM)

    what a dream
    to be written by the hands of
    suicide
    this poem has great depth
    lovely! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (5/22/2009 6:25:00 AM)

    a very well expressed poem..short and direct to the point..10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/15/2009 3:44:00 AM)

    Cute dream 10+ (Report) Reply



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