Dream Poem by Jhonny Thermidor

Dream

Rating: 5.0


A dream can only be a real dream,
When it acquires indefatigable efforts,
when its attainment is wrapped by obstacles.

Its real fascination can be marred.
But only if a man show lack of seriousness
While facing formidable obstacles.

Keep not your skills remaining latent,
They're all needed to deceive obstacles
But only if you fear nothing but fear itself.

A man might be fluent to fail better
But not ardent to even attempt to succeed.
Optimism is the key in majoring your dream!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evaughn Gray 18 June 2008

wow that was georgous, i truly loved it..~love Hazel

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Jolenish Fiber 18 June 2008

true, and very colorful vocabulary, but try not to overdue it. the last stanza is my favartite

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