Dream Poem by Sathya Narayana

Dream

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I have a dream
that a mermaid realm
from deep in ocean main
is wooing me to swim
in an ecstatic élan
clasping to their bosom.

I have a dream
that someone is humming
from a celestial realm
to come and dine
with them in the halos
of angelic aureols.

Let me yarn these whims.
It's my right to dream,
my well-cherished regime
...be it far from realism;
I'll be happy to resign
from this unromantic pragmatism.

Tuesday, March 11, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: angel,dream,mermaid
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raghu Chakrapani 31 March 2008

Hi The poem is great. keep writing. best of luck.

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Chitra - 23 June 2008

wonderful poem nicely done

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Kesav Easwaran 15 July 2008

yes every one has a right to feel romantic...to dream...to swim down sea or to float up on clouds...impressive write 10

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Mark Chavez 16 July 2008

Wow very good

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Jun Insigne 25 July 2008

good poem..............................superb...........thanks A10

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Seema Chowdhury 05 August 2008

what a lovely dream. i hope you can stay in your dream world and enjoy those magical moments in them.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 August 2008

....thoughtful expression indeed.......10

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Ency Bearis 05 August 2008

a deep thoughts..nicely written and to read...thanks for sharing Ency Bearis

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James Sides 05 August 2008

Thanks for your message. I very much liked this poem. You have a true poet's soul (tell me where I can pick one up!)

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Indira Babbellapati 30 July 2008

even one moment of bliss in whichever form is worth living...we don't really know wht real or wht's false...then y conclude?

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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