Drawing The Line Poem by michael hubbert

Drawing The Line



You say that you are leaving
then let me help you pack
don't curse and shout
just leave.. get out!
don't think your coming back

Please go and kindly make it soon
I promise not to cry
you've drawn the line
to me it's fine
there's one less egg to fry!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anong All 03 September 2008

i enjoyed reading your poem here, it flow'd very smoothly

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Martin O'Neill 03 September 2008

Sharp. Painful. Hope it's not autobiographical.

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