***downpour*** Poem by Dwi utami

***downpour***

Rating: 2.7


Felt cold of my skin*
The downpour descend very Quick*
I'saw the sky fully of darkness*
I'look at the dark everything around me*
The downpour make me feelings of silent*

Imagine all about of my sweetheart*
I'feeling needs a warm embrace and enjoyed together the panorama of the downpour*

So cold for my heart feeling all alone*
I'need all of from my sweetheart.
I'need see the rainbow deep eyes of my sweetheart*
I'feeling of deeply my yearn heart*
I'need touch the smooth sky from your hands*

Show me the warm light from your heart*
The downpour descend very Quick*
Cold and painful of my face*
Cold and painful of my lips*
Cold and painful of my arms*
Needs a little warmth*

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 August 2010

Rainy tawny Poem…symbolizing with fiancée…blooming …dancing…billowing… feet- tapping…emotion…all in one…romance-aureate [Elaborately ornamented] …wow! So much romance…just a minuscule for me pliss for poetry...lolouuud… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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as an elemental, i love the rain, if i walk in it alone. the downpour descends and releases receptive feelings of appreciation. you are alone in the downpour of your love, alone until the moments of his return.

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