Sylvia Chidi

Rookie - 27 Points (Germany)

Down to the beach


Down to the beach
Down to the beach
On a sunny day we go

Beach bags packed with sun screen lotions
Hands rubbing people’s backs in slow motion
Glistening oily bodies radiating with sensation

Down to the beach
Down to the beach
Where a chilly sea breeze blows

Let’s have some fun
In the red-hot sun

Down to the beach
Only there the ladies reveal saucy behinds
Whenever the raging sun is still kind

Down to the beach
As never-ceasing waves play across the shores
People happily play dreading any rainy downpour

Down to the beach
Where young lovers closely nestle
As sand creatures cause the sand to bristle
Seagulls gliding in the air with screams and whistles
Kids picking up shells and building stormy sand castles

Down to the beach
Where mostly good vibes flow
Down to the beach
We go whilst there is still sun without snow

Submitted: Thursday, May 11, 2006
Edited: Friday, July 23, 2010

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  • Rookie Joseph Sanchez (4/28/2014 11:24:00 AM)

    Down to the beach
    Where young lovers closely nestle
    As sand creatures cause the sand to bristle
    Seagulls gliding in the air with screams and whistles
    Kids picking up shells and building stormy sand castles

    Down to the beach
    Where mostly good vibes flow
    Down to the beach
    We go whilst there is still sun without snow (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Malik Ata (7/11/2012 6:30:00 PM)

    The poem is very creative; I like the fact that everything goes incline with everything else. When you started to talk about sun lotion made me realize why i hate the beach. The poem really makes me think about my own experience as a kid to the beach; picking up shells n what not. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Russell (4/24/2012 8:19:00 PM)

    This poem took me out of this cubicle and to a sandy haven. I wish I could read more like this at sharingpoetry.com. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bella Norton (9/20/2007 6:53:00 PM)

    i love this poem! it got a great vibe to it, one that can make someone happy! love it! (Report) Reply

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