Soumita Sarkar Ray

Silver Star - 3,291 Points (Kolkata)

Doubting - Poem by Soumita Sarkar Ray

A poem with no rhythm
Lame song with poor lyrics
Story that starts
never to conclude
A salt less sandwich
A plate with broken middle
a spoon twisted
a blade blunt
a boring book
a plagued painting
a loveless loyalty
a paralysed plan
an artificial rose
a marooned morrow
a luster less life
AH! this is a picture of mind
That is dipped in doubts


Comments about Doubting by Soumita Sarkar Ray

  • Gold Star - 9,424 Points Khairul Ahsan (12/16/2014 11:07:00 AM)

    You have so correctly described a doubt filled mind, loved it! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 10, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, January 16, 2015


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