Double Identity Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

Double Identity

Rating: 3.5


sun- - dark
moon- - pale
dress- - mute
code- - no word
system- - close
open- - -shut

feed- - mark
ex- - -inhale
no- - -shoot
mode- - unheard
these- - those
yes- - -but

water- - ark
fin- - whale
swim- - nude
back- - forward
choose- - chose
drop-lifeless-hut

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 11 February 2014

funny can read so much of your double identity, smiling because it intrigues me feeds me pleases me, but then so much of your double identity also sings within me, sun moon come dance with me, dark or pale nights stars above still shine bright, above immersion layers hiding light stellar distances passing, images senses play upon my heart strings, rivers oceans wash through my soul crystal waters sparkling, a rainbow bridge waits for me, a muse called poetry, spinning in word webs infinite choice purity, we delight in double images kaleidoscopes possibilities word imageries of poetic fusions

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Terry Craddock 29 November 2015

Poetic Fusions Ignite Tinder Minds Atomized double identity smiling because free it intrigues me feeds me pleases me double identity sings within melody me sun moon stars come dance with me dark pale nights stars shine bright for me immersion layers hiding light stellar distances passing images senses play upon my cosmic heart strings rivers oceans wash through my soul crystal waters a muse called poetry spinning sparkling word webs a rainbow bridge waits for me entices begs me cross infinite choice purity we delight in double images kaleidoscopes possibilities word imageries of poetic fusions stir sparkling soul liquid current crystal fusion waters a multiweb rainbow bridge waits entices begs me cross Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Double Identity' by Miroslava Odalovic. Dedicated to the poet Miroslava Odalovic.

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Terry Craddock 29 November 2015

Double Identity Poetic Word Webs funny can read so much of your; double identity laid bare on paper; as poetic paired word contrast; smiling because it intrigues; me feeds me pleases me, but; then so much of your double identity; also sings within me, sun moon; stellar come star dance with me; dark or pale nights; stars above still shine; bright above immersion layers hiding light stellar distances; passing images senses play upon heart strings; rivers oceans wash through my liquid soul stir current crystal; waters sparkling a multiweb rainbow bridge waits entices begs me cross; herald a mystic cosmic muse called poetry spinning in word webs infinite; choice purity spills delight in dart double sealed images; kaleidoscopes possibilities word imageries poetic fusions; ignite tinder minds implode stretch souls elastic flesh atomized thoughts cell released; Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Double Identity' by Miroslava Odalovic. Dedicated to the poet Miroslava Odalovic.

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Terry Craddock 16 June 2015

A Mystic Cosmic Muse called poetry spinning in word webs infinite; choice purity spills delight in dart double sealed images; kaleidoscopes possibilities word imageries poetic fusions; ignite tinder minds implode stretch souls elastic flesh atomized thoughts cell released; Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Double Identity' by Miroslava Odalovic. Dedicated to the poet Miroslava Odalovic.

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Terry Craddock 16 June 2015

Crossing Multiweb Rainbow Bridges with me; dark or pale nights; stars above still shine; bright above immersion layers hiding light stellar distances; passing images senses play upon heart strings; rivers oceans wash through my liquid soul stir current crystal; waters sparkling a multiweb rainbow bridge waits intices begs me cross; Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Double Identity' by Miroslava Odalovic. Dedicated to the poet Miroslava Odalovic.

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Terry Craddock 16 June 2015

Read Double Identity Paired Sun Moon funny can read so much of your; double identity laid bare on paper; as poetic paired word contrast; smiling because it intrigues; me feeds me pleases me, but; then so much of your double identity; also sings within me, sun moon; stellar come star dance Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Double Identity' by Miroslava Odalovic. Dedicated to the poet Miroslava Odalovic.

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