Miroslava Odalovic

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Double Identity - Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

sun- - dark
moon- - pale
dress- - mute
code- - no word
system- - close
open- - -shut

feed- - mark
ex- - -inhale
no- - -shoot
mode- - unheard
these- - those
yes- - -but

water- - ark
fin- - whale
swim- - nude
back- - forward
choose- - chose
drop-lifeless-hut


Comments about Double Identity by Miroslava Odalovic

  • Gold Star - 13,486 Points Terry Craddock (6/16/2015 7:26:00 PM)

    A Mystic Cosmic Muse

    called poetry
    spinning
    in word webs
    infinite;
    choice purity
    spills delight
    in dart double
    sealed images;

    kaleidoscopes
    possibilities
    word imageries
    poetic fusions;
    ignite tinder minds
    implode stretch souls
    elastic flesh atomized
    thoughts cell released;


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Double Identity' by Miroslava Odalovic.
    Dedicated to the poet Miroslava Odalovic. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 13,486 Points Terry Craddock (6/16/2015 7:20:00 PM)

    Crossing Multiweb Rainbow Bridges

    with me;
    dark
    or pale
    nights;
    stars
    above
    still
    shine;
    bright

    above
    immersion layers
    hiding light
    stellar distances;
    passing
    images senses
    play upon
    heart strings;

    rivers oceans
    wash through
    my liquid soul
    stir current crystal;
    waters sparkling
    a multiweb rainbow
    bridge waits intices
    begs me cross;


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Double Identity' by Miroslava Odalovic.
    Dedicated to the poet Miroslava Odalovic. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,486 Points Terry Craddock (6/16/2015 7:15:00 PM)

    Read Double Identity Paired Sun Moon

    funny
    can read
    so much
    of your;
    double
    identity
    laid bare
    on paper;

    as poetic
    paired word
    contrast;
    smiling
    because
    it intrigues;
    me feeds
    me pleases

    me, but;
    then so much
    of your
    double identity;
    also sings
    within
    me, sun moon;
    stellar come
    star dance


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Double Identity' by Miroslava Odalovic.
    Dedicated to the poet Miroslava Odalovic. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,486 Points Terry Craddock (2/11/2014 4:32:00 AM)

    funny can read so much of your double identity, smiling because it intrigues me feeds me pleases me, but then so much of your double identity also sings within me, sun moon come dance with me, dark or pale nights stars above still shine bright, above immersion layers hiding light stellar distances passing, images senses play upon my heart strings, rivers oceans wash through my soul crystal waters sparkling, a rainbow bridge waits for me, a muse called poetry, spinning in word webs infinite choice purity, we delight in double images kaleidoscopes possibilities word imageries of poetic fusions (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 16, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, January 17, 2014


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