Dorothy's Response Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Dorothy's Response

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There is an eminence amongst our hills.
There is a deep quiet in its height.
A man I love of lofty mind
Shares with that mount its quiet.

I admire the quiet.
I seem to require it,
Though it limpens his love for me.

If I wasn't so dotty
Instead of 'YOUR EMINENCE'
I'd have called it 'MOUNT DOROTHY'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 18 March 2012

Witty, great work. This Dorothy sounds like a dinosaur!

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Romeo Della Valle 16 March 2012

A very well penned and poignant poem that clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Raj Arumugam 08 February 2012

little anecdotes that are made into gems of poems, Douglas...great work

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Ramesh Rai 27 January 2012

a good name and a good poem

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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