Door Is Open Poem by Aftab Alam

Door Is Open

Rating: 3.8


Your glimpse put within me; hope
Hope to breath, to wreath, I lope,
Into the dream world; secluded,
Me and you; the curious soul divided,

Epoch of time of the wheel follow us
Rhyming with the rhythm of past; thus
Revealing, desire to search the lost face
Marathon, Walk, relay that's all are a race

Monday, February 23, 2015
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Susan Williams 18 November 2020

Your glimpse put within me; hope Hope to breath, to wreath, I lope, Into the dream world; secluded, Me and you; the curious soul divided, - - - playing with words is fun! !

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 23 February 2015

In the wonderful race all have to walk and door of Allah is open for his beloved children to realize life. Very nicely drafted innovative poem really.

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