Dont Leave Me Poem by mark bowdidge

Dont Leave Me



dont leave me standing there
all by myself
you had to go your way didnt you
when i needed you the most
the most important day of my life
and you were just bored
never again will i need you
so why dont you leave me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Connie Chambers 21 September 2008

a sign of strength is telling that someone you need them, a sign of weakness is telling them to go.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 15 September 2008

simple yet effective- good job :)

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Bethany Buhl 13 September 2008

I hate it when you need someone, but there not there for you so you just let them go and tell them to leave.

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Dayton Gillmore 13 September 2008

Very well written poem.... lovely keep writing

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