Dont Judge Me. Poem by millie st.claire

Dont Judge Me.

Rating: 5.0


Dont judge me.
Dont treat me like im a slave.
Dont act like you care about me.
Dont speak my name in vain.

Because every time you speak
You break my heart..

And every time you break my heart..
The more my soul disinergrates and vanishes because i made Careless mistakes and let you in.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 17 April 2009

Wow an excellent write...............Judge me not..................

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Nathaniel Booker 04 September 2008

Oh Yes Millie, I've been to that place, I've been that person, in fact, I'm that person every morning when I wake up as everyone clears a path for me for the first 45 minutes of every day. Terrific write. (you missed the t in disintegrate, though, I do that often myself and don't even catch after proofreading 50 times) . Be Well

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Kyle Shield Laster 16 July 2008

very aggressive. keep it up!

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Javier Falcon 02 July 2008

I like the ambiguity to this poem, can be interpreted to many occasions, well structured, good piece of write...

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Bobbie Jo ..... 01 July 2008

wow very deep. though good

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