Dont Go Poem by Terry jones

Dont Go

Rating: 5.0


don't go,
please stay,
at least for one more day,
all i want,
is to know,
what did i do wrong,
i plead,
i beg,
don't go,
i said,
but with no replay,
but a simple turn and a saddened look,
i sat,
broken hearted,
wanting only,
for you to return,
why go,
you looked so happy,
going threw pictures,
of happier times,
i fell to my knees,
and i cried,
please come back,
even just for a day,
and tell me that you love me,
one last time,
as the light around me starts to fade,
i realize now,
your not coming back,
you don't love me,
at that thought,
i realize,
that its over,
love just had to die,
i give up,
no more love,
no matter what you say now,
i don't care
you left me to die,
and my last pleading thought slips out of me,
please stay,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annie Girl 03 April 2009

love hurts.at times.........

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Amanda Ford 04 June 2009

one of the hardest lessons in life is everyone leaves eventually... you can hope, pray, beg, and plead... but ur still left just know, someday, somehow u'll be left, or leave so make the best of what you have right now, cuz you might never feel the same

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Halfway Broken Halfway Here 05 September 2009

ppl dont always leave....sometimes they do....sometimes u leave....and it can hurt either way...i left him cuz he liked her...shes my best friend...but because i ended it doesnt mean that i didnt love him and it didnt almost kill me leaving him...ppl are placed in our life for a reason...those who walk out teach us a lesson...those who stay are meant to be...dont wish for the one who leaves because we might hurt the one who stays...

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Scotty Dogg 12 January 2012

Another good one TJ. I feel the emotion. One neg, watch the spelling. Use spell check or a dictionary. Mispelled words take away from the poem's power, (which is a lot) . S

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Christina Hodges 12 January 2012

your a good poet i love this poem....

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Vipins Puthooran 04 January 2012

When we choose love, we take hurt too/ a sad poem! ! !

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Caitlin Daniel 09 March 2010

I LOVE it...it's beautiful in a sad, hurtful way..but that's what makes it great!

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Iron Panda 23™ 08 March 2010

mhmm....i likes this

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