Dont Bite Me! Poem by Laura Cummings

Dont Bite Me!

Rating: 5.0


dont bite me,
dont scar me,
dont take my life with your hands,
dont rip me,
stop hurting me,
im inside you,
stop falling,
you take me with you,
stop cutting,
stop hateing,
stop dispising yourself,
i am you,
when you hurt yourself,
you hurt me too.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kayte Henshall 26 July 2006

Truthful poem.. i like (Y)

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Angharad Cummings 24 July 2006

laura i think ur very strange and need siceatric help dearest

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Jon Lloyd 11 November 2005

Wow - wicked! Really hits home, but kinda 'sadmaking'...

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 27 July 2005

i really love this one. the simplicity of it works really well in this context. blunt, it really gets the point across. i like this percpective..its all..different. WAY2GO. :)

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Hayley Griffiths 26 March 2005

scary but still very interesting

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Laura Cummings

Laura Cummings

Alexander Hospital, Redditch.
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