*dont? ? Poem by iron panda 23

*dont? ?

Rating: 2.9


Peace, love and happiness
is for the living
pain, sadness, chaos and suffering
is for the dead

Wait...i think thats wrong
why didnt you stop me and correct me?
i think that this is how it should be.....

Pain, sadness, chaos and suffering
is for the living
while peace, love and happiness
is for the dead

Things these days arent how they should be
so much stuff is goin through my head
just for one second...or maybe 10
could i see what its like
and then make my decision

If i like it ill stay
if not, i wont
if anyone really cares
then nows the time to tell me
'DONT'....? ?

~IP23

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
mohsin amin khan 28 April 2010

a great mirror reflecting the real idea your verses really adress world with your five senses in a together style

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