Don'T Fake Death Poem by Little Star

Don'T Fake Death

Rating: 5.0


So horrible the death
If you fake it yourself
You could feel the blood
Running out of your flesh
You could feel your limbs
Being pulled apart
Your strength departing
Breath short and brief
Head in a turmoil
Brain bursting
Distorted images seen
From your heavy eyes
Now slowly dropping
You moan in agony
In endless pain
Your words now faltering
You wish not to suffer
You wish death would be real
And not a fake like you did
You call on God to end it all up
But it ain’t your time yet
So that makes every second so excruciating
The doctors will tell you
You should have done it perfectly
If you want to fake death

So now you're saved
God give you back your life
This time protect it with all honesty
Guard it from all anxiety
You still have to complete your mission
So take the challenge without hesitation
Keep your body safe
It is the temple of God
So love and protect it
Don’t destroy it
Love your life,
Live your life
In God’s wonderful ways

So don't fake death
Life is not ours to take.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marian Rosal 10 September 2009

there are fake money and very recently, fake death, this is serious

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Marvin Brato 24 October 2007

Suicide is a painful way to fake death, neither it solves the problem you wish to vanished! Face life squarely till death comes peacefully! Thanks for sharing, top marks.

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Sandra Fowler 21 June 2007

What an original title! And the content of the poem does not disappoint. Excellent write, Little Star. Warm regards, Sandra

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Madison M. Cammue 20 June 2007

you got 10 from me on this work! Keep it up..good writing

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