Don't Disturb Poem by Sathya Narayana

A depiction of disturb thoughts and emotions that brings out stresses and anxiety...nicely penned with fine metaphors and imagery...10+++

rhythmic elements talking about distrurbing emotions..nice one

The style and treatment both top class, the flow and feel are excellent, These disturbing thoughts impacts our senses deeply and brings out the best.... I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Almost lyrical in its composition can be put to music to be sung as some nostalgic song! 10! -Raj Nandy

what a lovely poem. i truly enjoyed your deep thoughts.

Very nice, full of pleasant scenes and sense provoking images. But your message is well balanced. We can't always have what we would like.

I do like this write - read like spices infiltrating thoughts, interesting, well done

An interesting poem Sathya....using nature as a backdropp for each idea expressed. I like the imagery too

Really nice. Each verse has its own flavor. Had a beautiful read.

sometimes anything is an intrusion and no matter how pleasant we turn our back from them. a strong case for privacy. nice write