Don'T Be Primitive Poem by Aftab Alam

Don'T Be Primitive

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Rule is needed everywhere-
War and love
Yes it is correct -many say-
Rule is for the fool-
Or everything is right -
In love and war
This is not fair in the realm,
Seeking peace
This obsolete primitive thought-
Still exist! An evil caught
And it is not civil
If rule of humanity is followed in war
And rule of chastity is followed in love
Worried-we legalized the evil in love and war
After all freedom is the inborn instinct of us
When war should be restricted—
For the sake of humanity
Loving is no way bad or evil—
It's the fear of society that lovers elude,
Society need correction,
Our thought needs correction,
War can't reach the peace,
If peace is there then ephemeral -
Middle east war is the same -
Go and read the history -
Love is for peace and nothing else—
Society is against that -what for,
I know- war avoidance is go for war,
Love for peace-pact between the souls,
That we don't want-
We need freedom by killing others freedom,
This earth is for all—a peace palace-
Who try to make it a castle like Jail-boredom

Monday, November 24, 2014
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Salini Nair 24 November 2014

Rule is for the fool- Or everything is right - In love and war.........................nice work...

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