Sadvansha Munshi

Rookie - 69 Points (24th March'99 / Kanpur)

~Don't Ask God~


He doesn't help a caterpillar to turn into a butterfly,
He isn't there to help when in water an ant is about to drown and die.
At first they helped themselves then only God gave them a hand,
In making and breaking of cocoon Or Safely returning back to land.

He isn't there at first place helping bees to collect honey,
He isn't there when a common man is in need of money.
They have to work hard first to achieve their goals,
Then God helps them to protect the honey Or provides safety to those souls.

So,
If you want fame
Don't Ask God
If you want a shortcut to your aim
Don't Ask God
To put everything in a perfect frame
Don't Ask God
If there is something precious which you want to obtain..
First try it yourself, Then Ask God...

Submitted: Wednesday, March 12, 2014
Edited: Thursday, March 13, 2014

Topic of this poem: God


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  • Rookie - 72 Points Yash Shinde (4/11/2014 1:34:00 PM)

    So,
    If you want fame
    Don't Ask God
    If you want a shortcut to your aim
    Don't Ask God
    To put everything in a perfect frame
    Don't Ask God
    If there is something precious which you want to obtain..
    First try it yourself, Then Ask God...
    ..............................................god helps only those who help themselves.................lovely message dear (Report) Reply

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