Domestic Shades- 14 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Domestic Shades- 14

Rating: 5.0


Fresh like the first ray
Freshened like the tickled lotus
She's in her school
Beguiled to feel joyfully secured
In the boat of same sailing kids..
They say freedom within limits..
My daughter says
'To learn to be obedient
To do all by themselves
To keep the shoes first thing in the stand'...
Back home
Happy birth day she sings
To everybody and Dhanam(maid)
Humming do..le...li...lo...le...
Hurling one shoe off there
Another one out through the window
Fifteen months old
My grand-daughter took me later
For a seminar class
To learn how to raise a baby

Friday, February 6, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 29 May 2009

good write...refreshing and scenic...talking visuals your poem bring in...10

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Ha..............ha! when you were reared and, at that stage of growth, you didn't have to deal with shoes and school...... like ur daughter did! isn't it AkkA :) VanakkaM -shree

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Catrina Heart 07 February 2009

a beautiful composition, nice poetic narration...10+++

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