Domestic Artifacts Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Domestic Artifacts

Rating: 5.0


THIS galaxy splintered into domestic
artifacts, theres a absence here, and
a ominous argument that ends with a
hand shake, yes both sides agree to
disagree,
but the repetition digs and digs,
untill it hits the right spot,
THIS galaxy cloaked into a haunted
silence, i smell the gunfire, and dead
peaple, and bombs that kill everything
but cockroaches, some times i sit
and cry, , then ask god, was this part
of your plan, or should i turn off this
tv, but the repetition digs and digs,
untill it hits the right spot, , ,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 07 December 2006

Yes, David, this indeed is the query and the quandary in life, whenever we attempt to understand why so many things in this world go awry....Can't blame God, without HIM taking back HIS gift of 'free will' to us.....For it is 'free will' that ultimately created HIS arch-nemisis, and it is he who pitches th'fork, so to speak...for now, that is...Great Write, David''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.

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Patricia Gale 07 December 2006

Fantastic title, the text.. well done!

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