Dog Dreams Poem by Ovidd

Dog Dreams

Rating: 5.0


If i wandered
through sanded desert
unknown
it would lead
somehow to how
i came to me

and there would
come a finger
presented with love
and would insane
it be
to enhance it with
less rock than clear
a glass that
glitters such
that starlets ponder

and then would not
i walk with her
to talk to friends
and all of all that i
would see
that was of everything

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 May 2011

Great poem. Very well described. Great imagery and style. Excellent stuff. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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