(dodgy Dave Tale) Gunga Din And His Amazing Crew Within Poem by JoAnn McGrath

(dodgy Dave Tale) Gunga Din And His Amazing Crew Within

Rating: 3.5


(Dodgy Dave Tale) Gunga Din and His Amazing Crew Within


First of the New Year Dodgy Dave Tale
But I think it's a reaction to the meds for his back that ails
You'll understand what I mean
When I write and create this scene
(Hallucinations just might be what David has seen)

We were chatting online again
And this is where the story begins
We said we were both to old to bring in the New Year
And remembering what we used to do for cheer

He said now he gets his kicks
Firing at balloons on the ceiling and dropping dust and bricks
And so this is where the roof has caved in
And where all the hallucinations begin

He said he saw Gunga Din the Merman in a saucer fly by
He was complaining David was shooting into the sky
This intergalactical Gunga Din
Had a special animal crew within

Each animal had their own oxygen suit
Can you just picture it? It has to be cute!
I don't know about you
But I think David has a new calling to pursue
Fictional books for the children's aisle
Or it's the meds for his back that has given him a new style....: O)


1 Jan 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 14 January 2008

There are many different elliments that come in to play when wrtting poetry, lifestyle friends, family, , , to name but a few, but after all of that I still can see that David is a lovely guy, this is a fine tribute to a wonderful soul Love duncan X

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Alison Cassidy 09 January 2008

You're absolutely right JoJo - I think he might even become a twenty first century Lewis Carroll if he continues at this rate. A delightful story about a charming and eccentric poet. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Meggie Gultiano 05 January 2008

you are really talented Sis..i admire you for being witty and your words of laughter just flows by..ha ha..I love this..top marks, for sure

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David Harris 02 January 2008

JoAnn, I laughed when I read it first time and I'm still laughing now. Nothing to do with the my med I'm afraid, I'm not on LSD I'm sorry to say. Just my silliness coming to the fore. I told you I was born on the Funny Farm so what else can you expect. Top marks and loved this lil sis. David the incorrigible.

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