Dodder Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Dodder

Rating: 5.0


Hey! Mr.Wise.Intellectual
what you expect from this man?
Do you want him to join your language marathon.
A skinny; you can count his ribs.
Let him stay as a semicolon
and don't make him a full stop.
You may keep your dogmas with you
and let him crawl to the grave.


From my stressful heart, dedication to a certain reader who insulted me publicly for some grammar mistakes of my poems.I agreed and I know my limitations as the English is my second language and without any hesitation I would like to say that I am still a beginner.Please excuse me, my friendly readers.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Tanguay 07 April 2006

That's telling him Nimal! Some of the english words you use are to diffucult for even me to understand. I have to look them up in the dictionary, you use very good english. Why don't you write that guy a poem in your mother tounge, and ask him to point out your grammar mistakes.See how good he does!

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Sandra Fowler 07 April 2006

In the language of poetry, I give you a ten. I also praise you for your honest and graceful dedication. Kindest regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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