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Jason Atkinson

Rookie (January 11,1984 / San Jose)

Do You See It?


The world has trained eyes to see what they want
Everywhere that We go we see the worlds trained thoughts
I Never saw It before until I accepted the Saviors soul
Now my eyes are opened to satins entertainment modo
Keeping their minds off Him is satins job to be done
It's very easy for satin when parents do not love the Loved One
Instead of seeking God, kids sit in front of a console
Being counseled by a device instead of parents who can give love and console
Kids learn best from parents who live a riotous life
Showing attention and love to their children and god alike

Submitted: Monday, July 22, 2013
Edited: Monday, July 22, 2013

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Social ignorance is running ramped in our society and parents don't see because they are entertained. Sick and Sad

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  • Silver Star - 9,377 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/20/2013 11:46:00 PM)

    Thank you for your inspiring comments, Jason. Have you read any of my poems along the same line as your
    Do You See It? poem? I invite you to read them when you get a chance. Let me know what you think. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,377 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/20/2013 11:46:00 PM)

    Thank you for your inspiring comments, Jason. Have you read any of my poems along the same line as your
    Do You See It? poem? I invite you to read them when you get a chance. Let me know what you think. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,377 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/20/2013 11:42:00 PM)

    Awesome poem - I love it! ! You told it so well, Jason. Children need our love and attention, not games
    and material things. You write well of important aspects of life. Continue writing and if it's alright I'll
    keep reading your poetry as time permits. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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