Do You Feel The Same Poem by lady grace

Do You Feel The Same

Rating: 5.0


what am gonna do
when I want to stay
will you let me wait
or let me free?

what am gonna do
to make a new day
will you let me know
the lies I made?

what am gonna do
if you make me weep
can I tell you
that I was hurt?

what am gonna do
if I want to leave
does it be as same
as what you did to me...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Arumugam 11 September 2009

a lovely and fresh lyric

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Joseph Poewhit 11 September 2009

Life is like a goldfish bowl. We bump into each other all the time.

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Nikunj Sharma 11 September 2009

Short, sweet, realistic, very appealing....good poem

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Surya . 11 September 2009

fine question and beautiful poem. thanx for sharing.full marx for you. surya

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2009

what am gonna do if you make me weep can I tell you that I was hurt? ..........i wonaa going to make happy all the way so long you are with me all the way. feel at home and when in trouble... this is beautiful poem and i loved to the very extent....10 read mine come home....homebound.... no separate ways..

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Anjali Sinha 22 September 2009

Meaningful questions Did you get your answers? good write........ -10 anjali

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

Thank you..................

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Miriam Maia Padua 14 September 2009

meaningful and touching... expressed heartily... Who is he, redlepz? nice thoughts...sweet feelings 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Eyan Desir 13 September 2009

I think it's good poetry this makes one ponder.. and poetry is about making the reader think so the author did well

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Akram Awadat 13 September 2009

lovely poem, i like it thanks a lot

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