Do You Even Notice Poem by Rob Penn

Do You Even Notice

Rating: 4.5


Do you even notice
When I get you a drink
Do you even notice
When I stop to think

Do you even notice
When I hold your hand
Do you even notice
When I help you stand

Do you even notice
The hug good night
Do you even notice
When I concede the fight


Do you even notice
That I am there for you
Do you even notice
The pain I go through

Do you even notice
The smile on my face
Do you even notice
That I love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wendy Young 28 July 2007

I found this poem by accident by just browsing and I think it is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it.

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Rob Penn 06 February 2007

I'm new to this poetry stuff, any criticism is welcome

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