Do You Believe In God? Poem by Alexandria Rios

Do You Believe In God?



BTW-My sister (Eryka) and I wrote this. I got some ideas from Cassie and her really weird poem. So here it is! ! !

Do you believe in God?
Let the heavens above
Blend the spirits together
Once fallen, no one saved
Do you believe in God?
Let the heavens above
Give us the feeling to live
Once fallen, no one saved

Fire, blood, & water rain on you
Fire, blood, & water rain on you

Don't forget give half the credit to my sister Eyrka. Thanks! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 June 2010

the way you present the poem is very excellent... but for me I believe in God because of the experiences that I had in my life - experiences that will make me too foolish to explain everything except if God is present... anyway, nice write again!

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Trevor Victor 03 June 2009

this is an awseome poem i like it i do believe in god but i dont go to church. i must say you are good i also have a friend she likes to wriste songs in english and math class

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Geovanni Leaño 20 March 2008

nice! ^_^ simply extraordinary! -GanNi

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 17 March 2008

Nice theme...I have written one similar 'Humanitarianism'

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