Do We Accept Poem by Lyn Paul

Do We Accept

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Why are there people struggling to live
Why are there people wanting to give
Why are there people feeling such pain
Why are there people with nothing to gain
Why are there people full of greed
Why are there people desperate to succeed
Why are there people with hatred for all
Why are there people not wanting to fall
Why are there people dying each day
Do we accept that this is okay




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LYN PAUL

Wednesday, September 26, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: Greed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 24 August 2017

Why are there people struggling to live Sometimes that will motivate them to be greater. Why are there people wanting to give Because there always people that asking for it and to accept Why are there people feeling such pain Because pain is part of growing..everyone does nobody excluded..it made us human Why are there people with nothing to gain We will gain in different ways..as long give up is not our choice Why are there people full of greed Because sometimes people are blind about good life and karma Why are there people desperate to succeed Because we are thought like that, to live different we taught to not to Why are there people with hatred for all Because their heart lack of loves, give some Why are there people not wanting to fall Because it make us in pain and we afraid that we cant make it well again Why are there people dying each day Because life is a short, a subway to eternity Do we accept that this is okay Be positive and fight to get well otherwise nothing will be fine If we can help people somehow, that is the best...to not in pain or sad that is what life beauty is about, to circulate love and compassion People can be bad, we should not be one because we making whole become more bad although if we only can be the only one good, at least not its better than make all bad but believe what is right and wrong because God will return your favor back to u, hope i answer you dear Lyn

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The Enigma 05 December 2012

This is quite unique piece, it really hits home and is so much truth.

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Louis Rams 02 October 2012

why is the question that we have no answers to, and to many questions for us to follow through.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 September 2012

so many question? ? I think someone may know answer! very concerned poem!

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