Do Not Disturb Poem by Bridgid Patrick

Do Not Disturb

Rating: 5.0


BEWARE! ! Lest ye should incur my wrath!
'Tis dangerous now, seek not that path
For on this day I have been scorned
And you, my fellows, have been warned
I am not of a light-hearted mood
You’d do well to leave me, while I brood
It may be said that I am fey
As would any who had lived my day
So hearken well, and heed my words
I do not wish to be disturbed!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dana Tyrrell 08 February 2006

i really enjoyed this piece, despite it's length. it has a good message. i know how you feel, im having one of those days today

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Gina Onyemaechi 08 February 2006

I'm going to risk your clearly dreadful wrath and disturb you with this comment: HILARIOUS! ! ! And the title is so irresistible! Great work! Warm regards, Gina.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 20 February 2006

Well done............................................................... H

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Sylvia Chidi 20 February 2006

Quite witty and nice!

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Graham Jones 20 February 2006

Written in olde english style makes this even funnier, an excellent ploy on the bad hair day scenario, well done. Regards Graham.

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Scarborough Gypsy 19 February 2006

Cute, clever and funny. Perfect rhyme too! Love Gyp's

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Scarlett Treat 18 February 2006

You are on a roll, because of your ability to see the funny side of even the worst of situations. Do Not Disturbe usually means something entirely different, and to see it differently is So Funny. Keep up the GREAT work.

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