Diversity Personified Poem by Smoky Hoss

Diversity Personified

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the cat laying there
on the floor,
black on a white rug,
meows,
and I wonder what she said;
and why the contrast,
her black against white
her language against mine
her ability to lay there
so comfortable, so at ease,
there on that white rug;
and I, so anxious
for the stains
my shoes may cause,
walking cautiously near them both.

Monday, October 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: diversity,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 07 December 2015

This reminds me of some forms of oriental poems of antiquity. Which makes it ageless. Wonderful insights beautifully executed.

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Smoky Hoss 07 December 2015

Thank you Patti.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2015

Well envisioned.Nice flow.Thanks for sharing.....10

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Sandra Feldman 13 October 2015

Well described scene., Transcends the written page, becomes alive. Very well done, poet!

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Kelly Kurt 12 October 2015

White carpet! : -) Tip toe, Smoky.

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