Distant Land Poem by The Devil From Hell

Distant Land

Rating: 2.7


Over the hill and through the gate
In the love and past the hate
A land far beyond your mind
So sacred that its hard to find
A land advanced with high tech smarts
With nice kind and caring hearts
Violence is not everywhere
Everyone’s some what kind and some what care
They give respect
There are no rejects
This distant land of which I speak
A land of which some do seek
This great land is not real
Of course with humans it could not deal
Cause with humanity it could not keep clean
Cause mad it would go and that would be mean
But one day it shall be there
And the question is when and where

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raymond Rivera 15 March 2010

I call it Unicorn Land. That place inside of our heads that everyone wishes everyone could relate to but can't because the world doesn't work that way. Good write.8/10

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