Distance Poem by Shahzia Batool

Distance

Rating: 3.8


My mind
with all the precious
treasures of memories
travels a lot...
but the distance
of its journey
is from
myself to yourself...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 02 June 2012

Yes! You have touched many peoples minds and emotions with your insightful, beautiful, easy to understand, yet deeply moving words.

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Shumaila Bari 13 September 2012

I feel true 'break-down' of language to describe how simply you summed up an overwhelming phenomenon of our lives.

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Walterrean Salley 11 October 2012

Profound Shahzia. And skillfully penned.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 02 November 2012

Brisk but very nice poem! Go to member club/member area then inbox to read yor mails. And tel me if u still cant see them. God bless.

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Gordon Tseng 11 January 2012

My mind with all the precious treasures of imagination travels a lot... but the distance of its journey is from being to unbeing...

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Passionate Reader 02 July 2013

Great compression! ! ! wise, true and insightful! ! ! :)

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Heather Wilkins 13 June 2013

short and to the point. I like short poems. I love the thought of this poem. The distance is short between you and me.

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Farah Ilyas 12 May 2013

wao brief but amazing poem, to write a brief poem to show some one's worth inspiration ally, wholly & completely is really hard task to do, but when it comes from a brillient poetess like you, there is no need to surprise

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Sun Shine 08 May 2013

A simple yet complete poem.

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Yasmin Khan 30 April 2013

It's nostalgic, brief and brisk, with a beautifully built paradox.

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