Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 213 Points (India)

Disobedient Eyes - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

My eyes reflected my lust
I abashed mixed up in dust

A pair of glasses at last
I ashamed got for a must.

My eyes now at a very ease
looked at whatever they please

Free from a deadly disease
my eyes now greatly appease.





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Comments about Disobedient Eyes by Palas Kumar Ray

  • Rookie - 14 Points Reetesh Sabr (3/27/2009 8:16:00 AM)

    yes we should be the first to ask thyself (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 116 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (3/23/2009 1:26:00 PM)

    Very good sarcasm......this is one kind of style in poetry I like very much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (3/17/2009 11:44:00 AM)

    we always prefer to wear a pair of glasses convenient to our own justifications...good poem...insightful...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, June 6, 2014


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