Discovery Poem by Shahzia Batool

Discovery

Rating: 3.8


I remember well
that enchanting moment
when Fate got kind to me
and gave me a chance
to discover You in me,
then, at once, I found You
in my isolation,
my thoughts and my dreams-
dreams that got rich...
since then, I remained
no longer isolated
in my isolation...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 01 January 2012

tender and feely....! written with ease and spontaneity... :) be happy

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Wahab Abdul 23 March 2012

''you'' is ''God'' or the love one? the protagonist must be your loved one as the poetess says '' fate got kind to me '' it could not be the god as the God Himself is the creator of your fate, so the poem is very romantic.....whoever is the loved one she or he / sun or daughter, or any one..............................................

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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

a nice verse.... keep the tempo

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Aman Sa 09 May 2012

Poems when they begin with a whisper and engulf the reader to end wid a music is a rare and real discovery. Enchanting!

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Shumaila Bari 22 June 2012

simple, beautiful and mystic... love it Shazia

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Passionate Reader 02 July 2013

lovely poem! ! ! This is one of my favourites! ! ! I immensely enjoy whenever i read this. This is the beauty of your writings that they flow like a stream! ! ! And this is your genius that you put forth a complex idea with such an ease thus make your readers love and cherish the beauty of your poems! ! ! since then, I remained no longer isolated in my isolation... My favourite lines; simple but beautiful! ! i loved it! ! ! YES a great discovery it is! ! ! :)

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Valsa George 20 May 2013

When we find ourselves in others, we no longer remain isolated in isolation! ! A small thought big enough to conquer very many hearts! ! A priceless moment of a great discovery either personal or philosophical! !

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Farah Ilyas 15 May 2013

Enriched in isolation, is a sign of true love.... very sentimental & touching poem... love your way of poetry.... believe me.

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Farah Ilyas 15 May 2013

Enriched in isolation, is a sign of true love.... very sentimental & touching poem... love your way of poetry.... believe me.

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Yasmin Khan 27 April 2013

Solitude becomes bliss and we are not alone when we discover someone in ourselves, a romantic piece written straight from heart. Dekhna Taqreer Ki Lazzat Ki Jo Usne Kaha, Main Ne Ye Jaana K Goya Ye Bhi Mere Dil Main Hai,

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