Discovery Poem by June FeirCruz

Discovery

Rating: 4.5


I am on heaven's door, everytime you look at me
I am one step closer to a different reality
Steeped in ecstasy, I do not even have the words to best describe
what you do to me.

I come undone
Just when I thought I have a clue on what you are
A discovery so inconsistent from how you make me feel
It leaves me reeling from grief, inconsolable - just let me be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Les Derbyshire 04 April 2009

Ouch! I was lifted by the first 4 lines - only to be dumped hard on the floor by the next 4! Clearly this was exactly as it was for you and you have created it beautifully for us too. (PS you need to make it 'describe' in line3)

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