Disapearing Love 3 Poem by Love's Disciple

Disapearing Love 3

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Ever since that dream ive never been the same
When i played foot ball i was off my game
but when i searched for her i was more determined
I turned down so many girls
For the hope that i would find her
Every day i felt worse and worse
It felt like a gypsy put down a curse
Finaly i gave up
And then she came
She was in a wheel chair and about to die
All of a sudden i started to cry
As i wept i told her i would never leaver her
She took her last breath and was gone forever
I visit her grave stone every day
I say hey and that i will be with her some day
I know she changed my life for the better
Yet i have only one regret I didnt say i love her

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lindsay Snider 20 March 2007

okay...you've got me crying. there's no more i can say. this is truly a good poem.

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jennifer hall 19 February 2007

this really touched my heart.....if this really happened im sorry.....keep up the good writting

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Aryn James 12 February 2007

i really hope you didnt have to really go through somthing like this.. did you? did this really happen? if so im sorry. It is a lovely poem. might sound cheesy but it warmed my heart..really. keep writting. ~ Aryn

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