Disagreements Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Disagreements

Rating: 4.5


He says I don't deserve this pain
I say I've done terrible things
He says my life should be happy
I say it never could
He says he'll be there
I say no one has or can
He says I'm an amazing person
I say I shield him from my horrible thoughts
He says I can be fixed
I say I'm too broken; time to be replaced

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Martin O'Neill 24 June 2012

Every minute of every day is another chance to start again. Think about it - it is in the moment of decision that the world changes. What, exactly is 'too late'? Change - or decide not to change. Either is a decision. Choose your own way.

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Kaia Grønnbæck 24 June 2012

This poem totally blew me away! ! ! Its raw and intense. AND i can totally relate. Thank you for writing, and never stop!

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