Die Trying Poem by Midnight Lily

Die Trying

Rating: 5.0


Do you care about me?
In any little way?
Tell me what you see,
Why do you turn away.

This cage of tears
will imprison me no longer.
I will face those fears
and become much stronger.

I will stop crying
Or i will die trying
My heart will stop lying
Or it will die trying.

You just walk past me
Without a care
Did you even not even see
I was standing right there

You never see the tears i was crying
But i will get you to notice them

Or die trying...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This actually sounds kind or suicidle i guess it is not really a love poem but i can see if you think that...this could be about anyone...Hope you enjoyed it!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stream Nightingale 20 December 2012

thats awesome girl! ! ! brotall love poem i think? ? ! ! ;)

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Sallam Yassin 02 December 2012

u have ability and talent and u need to take the postive side of every moment of your life to grow and shine more and more god bless with love

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Hazel Durham 02 December 2012

Great poem I really liked it, you have amazing potential for your age! Well done keep writing!

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Vijay Sai R 01 December 2012

very good poem...well written

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