Diamente Poems - 5 Poem by Ben Gieske

Diamente Poems - 5

Rating: 3.0


........................Empty
..............forgotten, forsaken
..sighing, wanting, resting, opening
mindless, thoughtless, sealed, sated
......satisfying, lasting, comforting
...............packaged, ready
.........................Full

.........................Life
................joyful, creative
.......inviting, beaming, promising
insightful, meditative, viewless, endless
.........hollowing, stupefying, falling
...............heartless, fateful
........................Death


.........................Wealth
................colorful, temporary
......empowering, grasping, blinding
wasteful, elusive, resourceful, abusive
.........needing, hurting, bleeding
..............spiritual, ubiquitous
.........................Poverty

.............................Sure
.......................certain, firm
..........convincing, daring, uplifting
......brave, decisive, shaky, cowardly
..........trembling, shifting, doubting
................nervous, hesitant
...........................Unsure

..........................Proud
................., solitary, divisive
.......teetering, thumping, flaunting
.......empty, noisy, calm, receptive
........trusting, knowing, rewarding
.................truthful, balanced
.........................Humble

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

These are really good...now I know how to do the form for mine! ! ! ! Thanks! ! ! ! ! a ten from me! ! ! !

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Luis Gil 02 July 2008

I like the symmetry of your diamonds

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