Dialogue With Self Poem by indira babbellapati

Dialogue With Self

Rating: 3.2


'my insider is tired...'
there's no 'mmm...'
or an 'ahh...'
in response

'this silence has
a thousand needles'
there's no 'is it so? '
'does it pain?
in response

05dec2009
14.30hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ranjit Ravindran 06 December 2009

Never mind.. give that insider some time to recover. The poets at poemhunter will take care of the 'mmm', 'aah', 'is it so' and 'does it pain' responses in the meantime. Take care. Love, Ranjit.

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Patrick A. Martin 05 December 2009

I think this is a very important dialogue and nessesary for ones good health, like all good things in moderation.-10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 05 December 2009

yes... the self, split into two... sincere expressions. thank you ma'am.

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poulas edward 05 December 2009

nay pain thy sould in wane...............

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Sandhya S N 05 December 2009

fine poem a dialogue with self a bit painful... regards sandhya

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visakhapatnam, india
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