Dew Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

Dew

Rating: 3.5


A voice of substance,
to pierce gray cirrus clouds,
a disobedient angel
dismissed by God
for carnal acts,
'twas morning then
and cold on earth.
He sat within the shade
of ancient junipers
and dreamed.
When, silently
a dropp of silver dew
bequeathed an urgent stir
and, like a butterfly,
she came.
It was the welcome nectar
of her hot desire.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rodney Russian 03 April 2006

A GREAT PIECE OF POETRY HERBERT SO WELL SAID WITH SO FEW WORDS WARM REGARDS AJS

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Sid John Gardner. 15 April 2006

Come on Herbert you can get eject a better one out of the can than this. Sid John (Disappointed)

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Gina Onyemaechi 04 April 2006

A sensuous picture of nature at work in every sense. I'll take it, Herbsy. G.

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David Gerardino 03 April 2006

disobedient angel, GREAT POEM, WELCOME BACK.................

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Bill Grace 03 April 2006

HN, Good to read you. Hope your world is well. Bill Grace

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kskdnj sajn 03 April 2006

And ' within the shade of ancient junipers', she slept at ease, yet only till, the gasping, ... of his next breath.. Beautiful poem. :)

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