Devotion Poem by Shabeeh Haider

Devotion

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You stepped into my world and opened up a door,
A door that was opened by no one else before.
You stepped into my life and made each day a dream,
Dreams are always perfect and that's what my days seem.
You stepped onto my path and laid the road with flowers,
And thus you have sweetened, life's minutes and life's hours.
I have much to offer you but nothing more to give,
Than this hearts devotion, every minute that I live.

Wednesday, November 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2014

I have much to offer you but nothing more to give, Than this hearts devotion, every minute that I live... nice lines...10 We were never known Yet owned Life that was precious For all of us I shall hold Your hand in world To show That we shall humanly grow

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Valentin Savin 28 November 2014

A very nice poem. I appreciate your last two lines: I have much to offer you but nothing more to give, Than this hearts devotion, every minute that I live.

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Paul Reed 27 November 2014

A beautiful and pure poem, short and sweet, nothing more needs to be said. Thanks for sharing with us.

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