Devoid Of Subtleties Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Devoid Of Subtleties

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I wrote my sentiments into poems,
To express and expound innate thoughts.
It is my fault that I cannot strike the passion,
Of poetic phrases devoid of the subtleties.

I am not a scholarly type of a poet,
Who scribbles poems with a score or rhyme.
I just want to express something in free verse,
A paragraph or two devoid of the subtleties.

Like most of the dreamers who attempted,
I too just grab a pen or click the keyboard;
At the surge of feelings so moved by an urge
To compose a poem devoid of subtleties.

Though somehow my poems seem so cold,
Lacks magic of the classic type of expression;
Yet I thank those who bother to read my writings
Even as they said most are devoid of the subtleties.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jemarie Ragudo 29 October 2007

Cmon! Don't be like that. A lot of people like your style of writing. We can't please everyone, right? Continue to write for I'm one of those who will go on reading your work.

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Raveendran . 19 October 2007

'the surge of feelings so moved by an urge' beautiful poetic utterance

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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