Devil's Puppet Poem by Victoria Tori

Devil's Puppet

Rating: 3.9


I cut myself
I want to run away
I want to kill myself
All the devil’s doings
For I am the devil’s puppet
And I must obey
His every command
I am tied down by his strings
Tied down by my arms and legs
For he controls me
My every move
And my mind
Belongs to him now
For I am the devil’s puppet
I must obey
His every wish
For he controls me
And I can not escape
He has my life in his palm
If I don’t obey my master
I may lose my life
I may lose my family
My friends
And the love of my life
So I must obey
My masters commands
For I am the devil’s puppet
And my life is in the very hand
Of death and despair

I am and will always forever remain as
The Devil's Puppet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yonela Mali 11 March 2008

i also used to be'the devil's puppet' but i decided to stop, take control of my own life.you can also decide to do that.you have a choice. nice write though

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~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ 11 March 2008

nice job i was the same way i told you my storys you know what i went though its up to you to chance your life and i will help you

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Asare Samuel Stickyphyn 12 March 2008

Mmmm this poem feels like you are really the devil's puppet.it a nice poem which expresses how devil's puppet feels inside and out, cus you mentioned it controls your life and thae if you disobey him it will take away your friend, family and your love which could be definitely be me. Well it is a nice poem you have.i give it 100%.

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Sarah Abdullah 15 March 2008

Ummmmmmmmmmmmm Nice Very Nice >_<

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Suicide King 22 March 2008

A very little dark poem, perfect actually lol

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Jamie Clapper 03 June 2009

that was good. I hope how or what ever is doing this dissapers, or is just on a whim, like some of my poems. Well good job it rocks.

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Wow tori..the devils puppet? ? ? You need to step up and take control of ur life u dont know how free youll feel 10++ great poem tho! !

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Does the Devil really make you do it? from what I know about magick you can ask daemons to leave you alone.Good poem.

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Serenity Prayer 10 June 2008

you may be the devils puppet, but you can always cut the strings. it may seem inpossible, but its not. God can save you, but only if you let Him. He loves you and hates to see you suffer, but God isnt someone who will take over your life by force, you have to give your life to Him. great poem though. ill be praying for you.

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Alan Curtis 19 May 2008

U shouldent b tha devils puppet, cause if I were tha devil I would make u my Queen.A woman like u should not live tha rest of eternity as a puppet or a slave. Sweet write Tori. Hippy Sav

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Victoria Tori

Victoria Tori

Away from all these love sick puppies
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