Determined Poem by Melanie Walendowsky Baker

Determined

Rating: 5.0


I'm so determined
I have no idea how,
but I need to leave this place -
it has to be now.

Impatience grows
with every single tear.
But I'm so very determined
to conquer my fear.

I don't want to stay
where pain is rampant.
Determination comes in though
when nothing else can't.

It just needs to leave me
this agonising rage.
I'm determined, however,
to start a new page;

with no one to need
and just me alone.
I'm determined, I am,
to be alone on my own.

(Itajaí,5 May,2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

lovely piece Melanie, nomatter what arises its that determination that will get you through, great piece, your a great poet.

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John Smith 07 May 2009

Wow, your style is so unique to you.

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