Determined Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Determined

Rating: 4.8


Efforts I exert now
definitely will bear
with something great
importantly good deal
no one can ever steal.

Jobs are hard to find
on this land like mine
high hopes I still hold
never stop being bold.

Life as a poor stude
is indeed a challenge
my sole lingering wish
success will finally shine
upon graduation rites
comes the moment
of my achievement.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 21 November 2013

Inflation had hit us so badly that today many have become jobless despite being graduate. Which is really pathetic. As in this poem it is rightly said One must always be Determined! Stay positive! Beautiful poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 November 2013

Such a nice rhymin poem on occupation n jobs. A topical issue. Enjoyd readin!

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David Wood 09 November 2013

Education is the only way out from unemployment. Education reaps its own rewards later in life. Good poem.

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Wahab Abdul 08 November 2013

condition of the unemployed depicted beautifully.. love it...

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 November 2013

Anxiety of an aspiring graduate in the world with a bleak job outlook is nicely presented in the poem. Thank you.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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