Detached Observer Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Detached Observer

Rating: 5.0


Detached observers,
and features withdrawn
by fates hand,
that scours obscurity.

And around the fountain sits,
those like yonder,
loud rush's blood too whispers,
close and vain apart.

Alone amongst so many
and the moss hangs deep,
aglow the fireflies light,
grey sleep masks intention.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dominic Windram 14 September 2019

Wonderful poetry abounding in powerful, vivid imagery!

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Tai Chi Italy 04 September 2009

A sheer delight to read, and yes IT IS great poetry. Smiling at you Tai

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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