Destiny Of Lovers! Poem by Sajna Kailas

Destiny Of Lovers!

Rating: 4.9


Fascination in modesty and mildness makes love in man
women often fascinated in courage and manhood
anyway when two are in love

They feel that they are in a fairy land
Their words are like a fanciful poem in golden lyrics
in shadow creeping alley ways they forgot themselves
waiting for a gently breeze to touch their pate
search for the lover's vestige from thousands of footprints
listen to the Raven's chirp; what they say about their love

By means their love grow up to its utmost stage
gradually they keep away themselves without reasons
only say best wishes, never say good bye and gone

Marvelous world and its beauty seems to be dark,
pays attention in rumours of cicada
curse the world and ruins the happiness of life
burns the fabulous memories in lonely nights
sing mournfully like a whine of featherless bird
try to awake from incubus, afraid to see it again

Implant a new life with new hopes and dreams
but sometimes the mind recalls the memories
as like the anger waves even though the sea shore not deserves!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 01 November 2011

Great poetic depiction/alluring my soul/ magnificient poem! ! ! ! top marks! ! !

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Jo George 02 November 2011

Implant a new life with new hopes and dreams but sometimes the mind recalls the memories as like the anger waves even though the sea shore not deserves! hare wa, no words to praise ur poetry dear poetess. well done........

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(De Va) 05 November 2011

well written...words that flow into my soul...blessings

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Bodhi U 21 November 2011

well written... good one

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Jose Lu 03 December 2011

Memories, and dreams. That's all what life made about.

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Dead Rose 11 January 2012

Wow, , , , , , it's amazing..........really a great poem....I like to write a poem like this one..........excellent write.......10******* Rose))))))))

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Rigzin Namgyal 03 January 2012

..wow..! ! ! ! ..it was amazing..oodles of romance... ..beautifully crafted in the magic of words...

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Rigzin Namgyal 03 January 2012

..wow..it was amazing... ..oodles of romance..

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Shihabudheen K J 15 December 2011

Destiny is often networked by some unknown vital forces which some call us god.lovely write

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Sonali Sings 09 December 2011

For whatever reasons love happens, it is better to have loved and lost than never loved at all..Good write.

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